We fought. We cried.
Mom had a tough time Indeed.
Swords were drawn,
Looking for silly reasons to quarrel.
I loved to fight.
I hated when she was right.
I could never hate and love someone
Almost equally.
But, when there was only one Ice cream,
We would always sit together
And share it happily!
Awww beautiful. I had a similar relationship with my younger bro while growing up. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :-) Life with Siblings is always fun :-)
DeleteAwww...I always wanted to have a sister. It's fun growing up with a sister...Loved it. Beautiful poem...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru :-). Yes, it's so much fun growing up with them, and it's fun recollecting old memories too :-)
DeleteWonderful...poetic too...
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir :-)
Deletethats actually sweet...
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
Deletelovely...
ReplyDeletewe all have similar relation with our brothers and sisters...
Thank you :-). Yes yes, We might fight and drive each other crazy, but somewhere deep down there are gallons and gallons of love and affection!
DeleteThat was just beautiful. :) So sweet and touching. As Saru had said above, I also always wanted a sister to play with. Your poem made me smile and was nice and soothing to the heart. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Raj :-) Emotions straight from the heart, I guess it is the emotion in each word which made you relate with it. Thank you :-)
DeleteVery simple and cute 55er. The words are as though they are said by a kiddo.
ReplyDelete"But, when there was only one Ice cream,
We would always sit together
And share it happily!"- Loving this!
The most beautiful things in life are always Simple :-)
DeleteThank you Vaish :-)
Very Sweet one, Ashwini:) Blessed you are to have a sweet sister!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir :-)
DeleteYes, I am indeed Blessed to have such a Sister. Touchwood :-)
Good one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir!
DeleteAreey So cute. Sibling fights :-))) Wonderfully written Ashwini!
ReplyDeleteYou know, It's these fights and arguments which are fun and cute and draws each other close :-) And I'm happy I had enough of them in my childhood. Thank you :-)
DeleteAwwww...beautiful,Ashwini!
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteBeautiful one Ashwini, Having a sister is boon :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Bharathi. Having a sister and being a sister is definitely a boon :-)
Deleteawwww..big awww...even i have a younger sis..we have bitchy fights..lol but at the end of the day we will always love each other
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Exactly. That is what matters right? :-)
DeleteThank you :-)
Way to go Ash...loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Charan :-)
DeleteSo true....
ReplyDeleteIt's an awesum post Ashwini ( as expected :) ).
I used to always fight with my younger sister when we were kids. Later I moved to different city and then I realised how much I miss her.
She was and is my best friend.
P.S. She got engaged 3 days back :) :)
Thank you :-) I'm happy that I fought with my sis when we were kids. Now Those fights make wonderful memories to relish :-)
DeleteGood Luck for you sis :-)
a cute little poem reminds me of my childhood days...
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Thank you :-). Childhood days are so much fun, aren't they ? :-)
DeleteI am in love with your blog!!!! I love this 55 fiction! It is so good! Describes my relationship with my younger bro! :)
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Aww..Thank you so much :-)
Delete(Darn! I wish I was your 150th follower! :D)
ReplyDeleteDoesn't matter Kavitha :-) Every follower makes a difference to me and my blog and I cherish them with equal happiness :-)
DeleteAmazing Childhood pic yaar!! And yes, Same applies to me as far as the icecream story is concerned! :)
ReplyDeleteHa Ha. Thank you :-)
DeleteRivalry mixed with love , that's innocence William Blake talks of.
ReplyDeleteVery nice post;made me emotional !
Thank you Sir. It is this Rivalry mixed with emotion, that makes it all the more special! :-)
Deletetoo cute ashiwini...reminded me of my childhood days when i used to fight with my sister... ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you :-) I love those childhood fights :-)
Deletevery very nice
ReplyDeleteThank you Sujatha :-)
DeleteNice and lovely poem...I never knew you could write poem as well...Wish I could give you the ice-cream for this lovely and cute poem:)....Is it you in blue dress???
ReplyDeleteThank you Mithlash :-), Oh I would love to get an Ice cream and Yes :-)
DeleteOh So Cute..Sisters in Arms - Sisters with Swords- i can relate to this well :)
ReplyDelete"Sisters with swords" became"Sisters in Arms" :-) Thank you :-)
DeleteThat was really nice post.. The photograph goes well with the words!
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteAww ! <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteYou make me remember my sister! :)
So lovely words..
So nice of you to post this one!:D
Thank you :-)
DeleteAnd Nice of me? No No, My sister was so nice to me, that I had to post this one :-)
lovely..simply lovely!!!..this is exactly how me and the brother behaved in childhood!!
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Thank you so much :-)
Deleteits so emotional...:)
ReplyDeleteWords from the Heart Ma'am :-)
Delete:) :)
ReplyDeleteI have a sweet angel..a younger sis 7.5 yrs younger to me..sadly I am staying in a hostel away from her coz of my studies and I miss her like hell...I miss the fights..her chubby cheeks...her voice..her eyes..her shouts..the way she calls me "Di"..everything I miss about her..amazingly I am teary eyed at the moment even though it's my third year at the hostel..truly heart touching...words only a sibling can understand...good work...
keep it up
Oh My. You seem to be missing your sister a lot. If there is one thing we can never be tired of, It is Missing someone. Thinking about the good old days gone by!
DeleteThank you :-)
good post :) best relationship is having a elder sis like we both have always throw blames and problems on them and escaping is the most happiest part for me:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Madhumitha :-)
DeleteYea, Escaping from parents by blaming the other, Oh what fun it was :-)
yie its just great fun always :) :)
DeleteHaah,siblings make your life so beautiful... Bad that I don't have one...
ReplyDeleteAnd you share your icecream?!!! Hmmm :)
Aww..That's what friends are for, for those who don't have siblings . ANd yes, I do Share my Ice cream with her ;-)
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