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Tuesday, March 27, 2012

55 Fiction Challenge - Life with My Sister.





We fought. We cried.
Mom had a tough time Indeed.
Swords were drawn,
 Looking for silly reasons to quarrel.
I loved to fight.
I hated when she was right.
I could never hate and love someone
 Almost equally.
But, when there was only one Ice cream,
We would always sit together
And share it happily!


63 comments:

  1. Awww beautiful. I had a similar relationship with my younger bro while growing up. :)

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    1. Thank you :-) Life with Siblings is always fun :-)

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  2. Awww...I always wanted to have a sister. It's fun growing up with a sister...Loved it. Beautiful poem...:)

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    1. Thank you Saru :-). Yes, it's so much fun growing up with them, and it's fun recollecting old memories too :-)

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  3. lovely...
    we all have similar relation with our brothers and sisters...

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    1. Thank you :-). Yes yes, We might fight and drive each other crazy, but somewhere deep down there are gallons and gallons of love and affection!

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  4. That was just beautiful. :) So sweet and touching. As Saru had said above, I also always wanted a sister to play with. Your poem made me smile and was nice and soothing to the heart. :)

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    1. Thank you Raj :-) Emotions straight from the heart, I guess it is the emotion in each word which made you relate with it. Thank you :-)

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  5. Very simple and cute 55er. The words are as though they are said by a kiddo.
    "But, when there was only one Ice cream,
    We would always sit together
    And share it happily!"- Loving this!

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    1. The most beautiful things in life are always Simple :-)
      Thank you Vaish :-)

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  6. Very Sweet one, Ashwini:) Blessed you are to have a sweet sister!

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    1. Thank you Sir :-)
      Yes, I am indeed Blessed to have such a Sister. Touchwood :-)

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  7. Areey So cute. Sibling fights :-))) Wonderfully written Ashwini!

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    1. You know, It's these fights and arguments which are fun and cute and draws each other close :-) And I'm happy I had enough of them in my childhood. Thank you :-)

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  8. Beautiful one Ashwini, Having a sister is boon :)

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    1. Thank you Bharathi. Having a sister and being a sister is definitely a boon :-)

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  9. awwww..big awww...even i have a younger sis..we have bitchy fights..lol but at the end of the day we will always love each other

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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    1. Exactly. That is what matters right? :-)
      Thank you :-)

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  10. So true....
    It's an awesum post Ashwini ( as expected :) ).

    I used to always fight with my younger sister when we were kids. Later I moved to different city and then I realised how much I miss her.
    She was and is my best friend.

    P.S. She got engaged 3 days back :) :)

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    1. Thank you :-) I'm happy that I fought with my sis when we were kids. Now Those fights make wonderful memories to relish :-)
      Good Luck for you sis :-)

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  11. a cute little poem reminds me of my childhood days...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you :-). Childhood days are so much fun, aren't they ? :-)

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  12. I am in love with your blog!!!! I love this 55 fiction! It is so good! Describes my relationship with my younger bro! :)
    Edible Entertainment

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  13. (Darn! I wish I was your 150th follower! :D)

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    1. Doesn't matter Kavitha :-) Every follower makes a difference to me and my blog and I cherish them with equal happiness :-)

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  14. Amazing Childhood pic yaar!! And yes, Same applies to me as far as the icecream story is concerned! :)

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  15. Rivalry mixed with love , that's innocence William Blake talks of.
    Very nice post;made me emotional !

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    1. Thank you Sir. It is this Rivalry mixed with emotion, that makes it all the more special! :-)

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  16. too cute ashiwini...reminded me of my childhood days when i used to fight with my sister... ;)

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    1. Thank you :-) I love those childhood fights :-)

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  17. Nice and lovely poem...I never knew you could write poem as well...Wish I could give you the ice-cream for this lovely and cute poem:)....Is it you in blue dress???

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    1. Thank you Mithlash :-), Oh I would love to get an Ice cream and Yes :-)

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  18. Oh So Cute..Sisters in Arms - Sisters with Swords- i can relate to this well :)

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    1. "Sisters with swords" became"Sisters in Arms" :-) Thank you :-)

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  19. That was really nice post.. The photograph goes well with the words!

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  20. Aww ! <3 <3 <3
    You make me remember my sister! :)
    So lovely words..
    So nice of you to post this one!:D

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    1. Thank you :-)
      And Nice of me? No No, My sister was so nice to me, that I had to post this one :-)

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  21. lovely..simply lovely!!!..this is exactly how me and the brother behaved in childhood!!

    http://sushmita-smile.blogspot.in

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  22. :) :)
    I have a sweet angel..a younger sis 7.5 yrs younger to me..sadly I am staying in a hostel away from her coz of my studies and I miss her like hell...I miss the fights..her chubby cheeks...her voice..her eyes..her shouts..the way she calls me "Di"..everything I miss about her..amazingly I am teary eyed at the moment even though it's my third year at the hostel..truly heart touching...words only a sibling can understand...good work...
    keep it up

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    1. Oh My. You seem to be missing your sister a lot. If there is one thing we can never be tired of, It is Missing someone. Thinking about the good old days gone by!
      Thank you :-)

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  23. good post :) best relationship is having a elder sis like we both have always throw blames and problems on them and escaping is the most happiest part for me:)

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    1. Thank You Madhumitha :-)
      Yea, Escaping from parents by blaming the other, Oh what fun it was :-)

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    2. yie its just great fun always :) :)

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  24. Haah,siblings make your life so beautiful... Bad that I don't have one...
    And you share your icecream?!!! Hmmm :)

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    1. Aww..That's what friends are for, for those who don't have siblings . ANd yes, I do Share my Ice cream with her ;-)

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